Me just standing while I watched what,
Went on the crazy person coming after me ,
I ran fast,faster than flash,
I went around the corner and…
he was done chasing me,
Probably after my brother, the one who was always there for me ,
On this dark misty day where no-one was,
In the middle of no where somewhere I didn’t know of,
Then I saw the person … speaking to a man, 
OH NO! He has my brother,
And probably going somewhere I didn’t know of,
I have to save him…
June 21, 2015 at 8:14 pm
Chilling stuff, in the tradition of Edgar Allen Poe, the famous writer of ghost stories. You should check him out.
I liked the comparison and exaggeration here:
“I ran fast,faster than flash,”
But wonder if choosing “Flash” lifts the mood a bit by making it childish when you’re going for a horror mood. What do you think?
June 28, 2015 at 6:58 pm
I will seach him up and thanks for your feed back and flash I will chose